【汉译英】增广贤文·路遥知马力日久见人心

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路遥知马力，日久见人心。
* z# O9 R' N  f2 `# R+ a两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
一人一般心，有钱难买针。
相见易得好，久住难为人。
Distance tests the strength of a horse,
times shows the shape of a heart.
United, there is nothing you can't do,
divided, there is nothing you can do.
  q! C% q2 k( W; O$ x# Mgetting along is easy when you first meet,
# z  j6 U9 S9 s; D' ]staying together is difficult.
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mxh3698

路遥知马力，日久见人心。
+ Z$ L* J% r0 {两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
2 e; f1 p1 {- f. k一人一般心，有钱难买针。
相见易得好，久住难为人。
/ v9 Y5 m4 U. x& nDistance will tell if
9 ^$ N2 F; d. O+ na horse is a steed or not.
( }* B! x$ q5 I8 d; hTime is the best test
& v  E  b, x3 d: m; Q. s8 V3 k# {of a human heart.
Nothing is impossible
for two persons of one heart.
. g/ t9 j6 G/ E; O" a- z7 W" S& O) F0 jNothing is possible
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each with his axe to grind.
  n! }7 g7 a. i6 W! T" h9 H$ G: YWhen you first meet,
getting along is easy.
Things get difficult,
" q/ m; b1 A4 e- mwhen you stay together.



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喬治兄

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 08:02
3 |( r/ I% t; n6 x/ L# e) {路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
( m. W: d! F( C5 ^4 V* P! m一人一般心，有钱难买针。

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路遥知马力
Long-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.

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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 08:30
$ Z( |  G3 K7 r% T( x路遥知马力
+ [- \9 n! `; R1 ~$ X2 i; gLong-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.

) R( l7 o" h$ T/ B& S3 S" n" Glong-winded词义词性都不对——
5 b% j: F, Y  O& k$ P5 q. U7 Ulong-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ
4 Y: l9 y6 u; `& P& r2 x; ?2 TIf you describe something that is written or said as long-winded, you are critical of it because it is longer than necessary.
The manifesto is long-winded, repetitious and often ambiguous or poorly drafted...
I hope I'm not being too long-winded.

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:00
1 Z& s( ?1 y3 L. {7 rlong-winded词义词性都不对——
long-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ

若改成
Long-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
是否可免強過關

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long-winded


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1 (of speech or writing) tediously lengthy (演讲或文章)冗长乏味的

2 able to run a long distance without rest 一口气跑完长距离的

Phrases & Derivatives
" ?2 |$ ^. s3 s5 `2 c, o0 ^; g" Ilong-windedly adv.

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* \; t, `" G1 T& qlong-windedness n.

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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:04
若改成
Long-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
是否可免強過關

何不直接用distance？
字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
7 F: ^7 U+ J2 j: G. u+ J2 i9 R+ ]proper word in proper place，不够proper的话，不光有词义的原因，还有register等其他的原因

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:34
5 ]' D  ?  v; r0 I* S何不直接用distance？
* V# B: |' M3 s1 k' c* c2 \字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
proper word in proper place， ...

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mxh3698 兄:
  R2 }5 ]$ X" ]; Z( J: E+ n不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot
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还有register等其他的原因

是否是指文法上
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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:55
mxh3698 兄:
不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot
是否是指文法上

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In linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of language, which is usually appropriate to the situation or circumstances in which it is used. (TECHNICAL)

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 11:24
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In linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of l ...

Brother mxh3698 :
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