【汉译英】增广贤文·路遥知马力日久见人心

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路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
" {( b' e( R* C1 g! X一人一般心，有钱难买针。
! E; f) x% A. \相见易得好，久住难为人。
Distance tests the strength of a horse,
" l; s# u: b: n- ptimes shows the shape of a heart.
United, there is nothing you can't do,
8 D# a" d3 W  f$ \; Adivided, there is nothing you can do.
, Q" B7 N- O$ ]3 L/ v: lgetting along is easy when you first meet,
( ~1 j# h& S$ p/ {% r- nstaying together is difficult.



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mxh3698

路遥知马力，日久见人心。
1 Q# B) H* }& W( F两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
3 p  N7 ~2 d" d& Z+ Q/ w: h" c一人一般心，有钱难买针。
相见易得好，久住难为人。
/ v3 ^$ K; Q' A% ?1 xDistance will tell if
a horse is a steed or not.
Time is the best test
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Nothing is impossible
for two persons of one heart.
# @  F% D9 J& C# a* {; jNothing is possible
for people
each with his axe to grind.
- p2 D, @" M& q" _. {When you first meet,
getting along is easy.
+ D- P# ]( k1 C9 K. Q$ gThings get difficult,
when you stay together.

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喬治兄

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 08:02
' N( c0 o& M; m& X: w路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
一人一般心，有钱难买针。

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( O. ~5 E+ d2 Y9 ?% e/ p& Z/ C; oLong-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.

mxh3698

喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 08:30
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Long-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.

long-winded词义词性都不对——
long-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ
If you describe something that is written or said as long-winded, you are critical of it because it is longer than necessary.
The manifesto is long-winded, repetitious and often ambiguous or poorly drafted...
2 M$ ?9 p( t* EI hope I'm not being too long-winded.

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:00
8 R+ E" k+ j6 f& ], K' M+ _long-winded词义词性都不对——
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[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ

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Long-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
是否可免強過關

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8 u. w" Q  B, wlong-winded
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adj.
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1 (of speech or writing) tediously lengthy (演讲或文章)冗长乏味的
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' v  [- K: D& y8 l: I& s2 able to run a long distance without rest 一口气跑完长距离的
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. J* A; u0 V% V2 p, X! _* L1 q2 Y% IPhrases & Derivatives
long-windedly adv.
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long-windedness n.

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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:04
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% ~' |7 D- v. [; hLong-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
是否可免強過關

何不直接用distance？
字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
/ ]* ~" X. C8 Z) t8 v# D* x4 gproper word in proper place，不够proper的话，不光有词义的原因，还有register等其他的原因

喬治兄

mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:34
何不直接用distance？
字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
proper word in proper place， ...

mxh3698 兄:
. B" E, K' }, M/ ~0 f不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot

还有register等其他的原因

是否是指文法上
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mxh3698

喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:55
mxh3698 兄:
不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot
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In linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of language, which is usually appropriate to the situation or circumstances in which it is used. (TECHNICAL)
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汉语，语域。

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 11:24
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4 T  W- r) ?# L& cIn linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of l ...

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