【汉译英】增广贤文·路遥知马力日久见人心

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4 B9 A1 c3 G* W2 Z$ t3 c路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
7 B5 H; f; R5 D  C一人一般心，有钱难买针。
& M6 y8 G0 {8 K. t# C3 D相见易得好，久住难为人。
) w; D% H4 J. q1 y8 y3 f4 c) qDistance tests the strength of a horse,
times shows the shape of a heart.
  z- t) [3 `  ?3 }' }8 M+ nUnited, there is nothing you can't do,
( I$ i7 v- d" t2 a$ C  ]- t. e9 ddivided, there is nothing you can do.
2 q8 L/ ^' _3 q" g6 u" e5 y0 Vgetting along is easy when you first meet,
staying together is difficult.

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mxh3698

路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
; g4 N2 `  \! h! [: n一人一般心，有钱难买针。
相见易得好，久住难为人。
2 E2 C  y" g5 @9 `$ a8 BDistance will tell if
2 V5 W  j$ G; X/ y( K7 j$ y; La horse is a steed or not.
5 K$ @3 E+ x; I. i* J2 ?8 g5 I9 x! hTime is the best test
of a human heart.
* \; F" [7 v' \4 q, M1 {) Q: E: gNothing is impossible
% N! l: |* y: cfor two persons of one heart.
: L9 T8 w$ c5 ^5 _Nothing is possible
+ |. z* X+ G/ y/ a* nfor people
7 q$ S# e$ I9 u0 g8 keach with his axe to grind.
5 E" i2 k! p: P, H( |When you first meet,
getting along is easy.
! l( J8 e' \- W* j1 _Things get difficult,
when you stay together.



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喬治兄

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 08:02
路遥知马力，日久见人心。
  h7 r, g% c8 ^8 o# ]( B0 o% E两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
一人一般心，有钱难买针。

路遥知马力
Long-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
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mxh3698

喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 08:30
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Long-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.

+ u7 j/ u$ U# f& E9 U: v6 ?3 |9 F9 xlong-winded词义词性都不对——
long-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ
3 r& }0 `3 F8 S0 X# Z% B- mIf you describe something that is written or said as long-winded, you are critical of it because it is longer than necessary.
The manifesto is long-winded, repetitious and often ambiguous or poorly drafted...
I hope I'm not being too long-winded.

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:00
long-winded词义词性都不对——
long-winded
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8 b! e1 U/ A5 t( e$ E/ f0 cLong-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
$ ?+ E2 @% b8 O1 v2 K是否可免強過關
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long-winded


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; K! x  e! A1 q* t1 (of speech or writing) tediously lengthy (演讲或文章)冗长乏味的
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2 able to run a long distance without rest 一口气跑完长距离的

Phrases & Derivatives
long-windedly adv.
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7 Q. p: }, ]) a/ qlong-windedness n.

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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:04
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% e4 \2 h; }" i$ s& lLong-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
是否可免強過關

何不直接用distance？
字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
. p! X) F! V  e0 E2 o9 g% ?proper word in proper place，不够proper的话，不光有词义的原因，还有register等其他的原因

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:34
何不直接用distance？
字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
1 p6 K/ l) B9 n0 e3 Y# Wproper word in proper place， ...

mxh3698 兄:
不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot

还有register等其他的原因

是否是指文法上
4 J* p7 Q% j5 h$ U6 M1 X& ], v補語或受詞....類似此類的問題

mxh3698

喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:55
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5 B0 {! [( ?" B; G! @不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot
8 ~5 K$ \9 W! S是否是指文法上

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6 U+ u8 P- z! P7 z# W) H0 X8 cIn linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of language, which is usually appropriate to the situation or circumstances in which it is used. (TECHNICAL)

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 11:24
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In linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of l ...

Brother mxh3698 :
Thanks a lot.