【汉译英】增广贤文·路遥知马力日久见人心

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) |; u* `) j, |) w- g$ g( I路遥知马力，日久见人心。
( ^% V; ]' n- k$ [" D3 I% z. d! B两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
; o8 b2 U; I, ?8 e* C3 M一人一般心，有钱难买针。
( ~6 g% e+ r* \/ w5 q5 Q相见易得好，久住难为人。
' q3 I, u* m$ K$ z  j& }6 SDistance tests the strength of a horse,
times shows the shape of a heart.
United, there is nothing you can't do,
divided, there is nothing you can do.
getting along is easy when you first meet,
1 G, }' g$ D- ^staying together is difficult.

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mxh3698

路遥知马力，日久见人心。
; z5 l! f) G% K& `5 [( m4 z9 P两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
' W  f/ a- C) o- \0 c5 x一人一般心，有钱难买针。
相见易得好，久住难为人。
Distance will tell if
a horse is a steed or not.
5 ~. m# y$ U' |& R" {Time is the best test
of a human heart.
4 }& l% S; }$ x; jNothing is impossible
for two persons of one heart.
Nothing is possible
" k/ v6 }: y& S" D& S, Wfor people
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When you first meet,
getting along is easy.
Things get difficult,
! o% _" u/ X8 x& ]: J' q0 iwhen you stay together.


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喬治兄

mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 08:02
路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
  ^7 c2 J+ p2 N. L' m: d% r一人一般心，有钱难买针。

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路遥知马力
! Z; |) U" F0 f7 uLong-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.

mxh3698

喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 08:30
路遥知马力
Long-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.

long-winded词义词性都不对——
long-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ
2 m9 A, E1 j$ I4 b) `0 ^3 dIf you describe something that is written or said as long-winded, you are critical of it because it is longer than necessary.
4 l' Q6 ~9 N  B7 f8 iThe manifesto is long-winded, repetitious and often ambiguous or poorly drafted...
I hope I'm not being too long-winded.

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:00
long-winded词义词性都不对——
1 ^+ {3 L; [) D8 `- M6 |9 B9 p5 dlong-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ

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若改成
Long-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
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long-winded

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4 F9 m9 w0 ~3 F5 M- g, C% Z2 Aadj.

* Y# z, P# s5 U$ [( w1 (of speech or writing) tediously lengthy (演讲或文章)冗长乏味的
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2 able to run a long distance without rest 一口气跑完长距离的
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Phrases & Derivatives
5 P6 c0 E* g$ ]& D' @7 rlong-windedly adv.

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long-windedness n.

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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:04
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Long-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
是否可免強過關

何不直接用distance？
4 ]8 \8 D+ G) H& s字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
; y1 W+ J0 ]" x: v' qproper word in proper place，不够proper的话，不光有词义的原因，还有register等其他的原因

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:34
何不直接用distance？
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mxh3698 兄:
9 T' z+ S8 @5 e# U1 a. e" \不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot

还有register等其他的原因

是否是指文法上
補語或受詞....類似此類的問題

mxh3698

喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:55
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0 ?+ l; G  [. q) r不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot
: s9 Q+ p! z$ Y; `5 C* a. x是否是指文法上

8 ^4 m! e) [! b8 [N-VAR]
In linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of language, which is usually appropriate to the situation or circumstances in which it is used. (TECHNICAL)
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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 11:24
7 l/ f$ y6 z+ ?8 v3 U8 [N-VAR]
/ M: q/ `0 Q8 iIn linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of l ...

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Thanks a lot.