【汉译英】增广贤文·路遥知马力日久见人心

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路遥知马力，日久见人心。
$ e5 v# O1 O! [* w  r两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
一人一般心，有钱难买针。
- A: T7 F2 b9 b/ B4 Q- k. ?7 ~相见易得好，久住难为人。
Distance tests the strength of a horse,
times shows the shape of a heart.
United, there is nothing you can't do,
divided, there is nothing you can do.
3 H, f' ^- T1 d6 a! P. k) ?getting along is easy when you first meet,
1 Z& z. M7 @2 ]' h0 \8 A8 I( h9 O% istaying together is difficult.
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mxh3698

路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
/ c$ k, k- Y5 {+ R4 v. G- H一人一般心，有钱难买针。
/ h+ }. X& W1 A# C/ Q) j/ H相见易得好，久住难为人。
Distance will tell if
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Time is the best test
of a human heart.
" n) b: _1 Y; \0 J6 r) ^/ uNothing is impossible
5 K/ `# G) ~; g& v! Ifor two persons of one heart.
Nothing is possible
for people
each with his axe to grind.
( n! a' v$ z( A0 P: WWhen you first meet,
getting along is easy.
3 s; p* |) ~* V- p+ C8 O5 MThings get difficult,
when you stay together.
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喬治兄

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 08:02
& C1 F& O, q; f5 |& q3 B9 h路遥知马力，日久见人心。
1 r5 D2 G* J4 m/ g# @0 @4 D& }两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
一人一般心，有钱难买针。

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Long-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
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mxh3698

喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 08:30
路遥知马力
Long-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.

( O0 H+ Y$ w6 D5 \6 ^5 [8 Plong-winded词义词性都不对——
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" }7 K$ t: `$ h$ V8 k. ]) Q. j[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ
. o7 M. f: q6 {% jIf you describe something that is written or said as long-winded, you are critical of it because it is longer than necessary.
The manifesto is long-winded, repetitious and often ambiguous or poorly drafted...
* c* H& F/ x0 r) D0 u+ J- yI hope I'm not being too long-winded.

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:00
long-winded词义词性都不对——
long-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ

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Long-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
! a, T' S( C3 a3 i  q是否可免強過關
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  P- D7 H# ]) K3 l/ {long-winded

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adj.

1 (of speech or writing) tediously lengthy (演讲或文章)冗长乏味的
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* l* W. m. P3 n. ~* S: o2 able to run a long distance without rest 一口气跑完长距离的
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4 c' x+ O" y" {/ VPhrases & Derivatives
long-windedly adv.


long-windedness n.

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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:04
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7 t! u  l" o4 Y6 ?9 b) QLong-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
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何不直接用distance？
字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
1 v) B3 e0 N( `$ r" `; G3 ^. Qproper word in proper place，不够proper的话，不光有词义的原因，还有register等其他的原因

喬治兄

mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:34
何不直接用distance？
" m4 B' A4 j5 g字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
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7 `4 c* O) x5 M2 \. T% Omxh3698 兄:
1 n7 J7 M0 a' m7 W' r* W' P不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot

还有register等其他的原因

是否是指文法上
補語或受詞....類似此類的問題

mxh3698

喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:55
mxh3698 兄:
不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot
是否是指文法上

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In linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of language, which is usually appropriate to the situation or circumstances in which it is used. (TECHNICAL)
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% I4 f0 L; E6 w7 K$ F汉语，语域。

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 11:24
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& C) a7 ^/ |* P4 k( f+ D" S/ ^2 gIn linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of l ...

Brother mxh3698 :
% q2 C: u# H4 N/ EThanks a lot.