【汉译英】增广贤文·路遥知马力日久见人心

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  g- X' V, Q2 \2 b0 r, n' L路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
7 |& K* F% L: ]( k( @5 j一人一般心，有钱难买针。
相见易得好，久住难为人。
3 Q3 X* d( x6 w0 y& VDistance tests the strength of a horse,
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United, there is nothing you can't do,
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getting along is easy when you first meet,
staying together is difficult.
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mxh3698

路遥知马力，日久见人心。
" {) J8 U/ \- Z* o* D9 i7 y两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
一人一般心，有钱难买针。
, `0 y/ Y1 ~0 ^) x2 \6 x相见易得好，久住难为人。
Distance will tell if
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Time is the best test
of a human heart.
8 b# g! s' U* ~% F& H; Q% X. \Nothing is impossible
6 m4 ]: S! H4 C9 {  K$ vfor two persons of one heart.
Nothing is possible
for people
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When you first meet,
getting along is easy.
Things get difficult,
2 F9 }. ?1 J+ h* k9 X5 o: ^when you stay together.
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喬治兄

mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 08:02
路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
一人一般心，有钱难买针。

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& \) d2 H$ S7 n# N' b9 G( KLong-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
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mxh3698

喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 08:30
路遥知马力
Long-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.

: t6 I+ S# `* B9 R, i4 y5 [, wlong-winded词义词性都不对——
0 @) J! I$ }9 `% o: d5 slong-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ
$ W- `* {; l6 T3 ^) L* eIf you describe something that is written or said as long-winded, you are critical of it because it is longer than necessary.
The manifesto is long-winded, repetitious and often ambiguous or poorly drafted...
- U* q& b) I( K/ w5 f5 m! GI hope I'm not being too long-winded.

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:00
long-winded词义词性都不对——
long-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ

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Long-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
是否可免強過關
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long-winded
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; d4 p# D& x9 |' ~; m9 l1 (of speech or writing) tediously lengthy (演讲或文章)冗长乏味的

2 able to run a long distance without rest 一口气跑完长距离的
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long-windedly adv.
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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:04
若改成
Long-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
是否可免強過關

何不直接用distance？
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5 o* @. ^: Q3 B( R; Zproper word in proper place，不够proper的话，不光有词义的原因，还有register等其他的原因

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:34
何不直接用distance？
字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
proper word in proper place， ...

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mxh3698 兄:
不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot

还有register等其他的原因

是否是指文法上
補語或受詞....類似此類的問題

mxh3698

喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:55
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$ [+ T0 \) p( E- O: D$ M  I' R( R2 i不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot
是否是指文法上

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In linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of language, which is usually appropriate to the situation or circumstances in which it is used. (TECHNICAL)

汉语，语域。

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 11:24
0 L( `) C5 z& n4 M- B2 Y7 y+ c8 [N-VAR]
In linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of l ...

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