【汉译英】增广贤文·路遥知马力日久见人心

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# _5 Q5 A% y: G8 @5 D路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
- a" o" X! R2 [一人一般心，有钱难买针。
相见易得好，久住难为人。
Distance tests the strength of a horse,
& ]8 w# |1 k3 b2 l+ ntimes shows the shape of a heart.
United, there is nothing you can't do,
0 b" m& Q' S0 O, o' z# m5 t, L$ Ldivided, there is nothing you can do.
( V3 m6 W# p# t. Q! P2 Ngetting along is easy when you first meet,
/ x. g, H" D9 `7 y- J0 o% R0 O: Mstaying together is difficult.
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mxh3698

路遥知马力，日久见人心。
两人一般心，无钱堪买金；
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' q/ B& ?: c$ D% z6 B# O  E) D; l' r相见易得好，久住难为人。
Distance will tell if
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of a human heart.
Nothing is impossible
for two persons of one heart.
Nothing is possible
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each with his axe to grind.
; H9 A& Z7 }# J% dWhen you first meet,
getting along is easy.
  `. }6 c4 G' r, b8 D* SThings get difficult,
8 J* Q0 ]8 p$ @. W& L: }) B- e! V7 Gwhen you stay together.

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喬治兄

mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 08:02
路遥知马力，日久见人心。
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一人一般心，有钱难买针。

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路遥知马力
Long-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 08:30
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Long-winded will demonstrate how a stallion would be.

1 ], c: C, o% ?long-winded词义词性都不对——
long-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ
If you describe something that is written or said as long-winded, you are critical of it because it is longer than necessary.
/ L" T* P4 ]. b9 v$ EThe manifesto is long-winded, repetitious and often ambiguous or poorly drafted...
I hope I'm not being too long-winded.

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:00
  K# i" I9 I% o! M7 qlong-winded词义词性都不对——
2 k0 v9 E1 {6 s5 ?long-winded
[ADJ] usu v-link ADJ

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若改成
2 |  g9 b3 B, T6 N8 k- r+ A* ULong-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
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long-winded


adj.

1 (of speech or writing) tediously lengthy (演讲或文章)冗长乏味的

2 able to run a long distance without rest 一口气跑完长距离的

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long-windedly adv.
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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:04
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Long-windedness will demonstrate how a stallion would be.
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何不直接用distance？
字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
8 `  C7 q; @0 v8 [proper word in proper place，不够proper的话，不光有词义的原因，还有register等其他的原因

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 09:34
何不直接用distance？
7 K" K5 Y9 t6 u字典上有这个意思，并不意味着这个意思就是合适的
proper word in proper place， ...

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还有register等其他的原因

是否是指文法上
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喬治兄 发表于 2020-5-4 09:55
mxh3698 兄:
& t3 ]6 f: l) r. e不知道 這個是什請指點迷津一下, Thanks a lot
2 F7 B8 _, w9 X1 S/ y: I是否是指文法上

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In linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of language, which is usually appropriate to the situation or circumstances in which it is used. (TECHNICAL)
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& X: q9 t. }( T) ?汉语，语域。

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mxh3698 发表于 2020-5-4 11:24
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In linguistics, the register of a piece of speech or writing is its level and style of l ...

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