很多人会错误使用的口语表达

冰上走的小猫猫

对话的情节是：
/ P- _# B  k# h: n6 p; kA上半场的篮球比赛发挥欠佳，不想继续上场了，怕连累了球队。但是队友B劝他上场，队伍需要他。
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0 f5 j! X% E* Y% r9 v6 Q$ SA: I can't go out there again.
. U6 _& a6 j8 SB: You just weren't ready. Go back out there! Your team needs you.
4 ?6 E5 v3 y3 E1 N. N' y; D' KA: I am going to make my team lose if I keep playing.
B: No, that is not true. I trust you.
8 Q6 ~1 N( Y* [# IA: OK, I am going to give it one more shot, but I'm not sure how good it will be.
B: Now you are talking!
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0 t$ H- g) @/ `这小段对话中应该是有一处表达问题的。你们能发现么？
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事后公布答案

09rmb

这段对话里，英文太不地道了，chinglish严重=-=还要怎么纠错

冰上走的小猫猫

09rmb 发表于 2018-3-18 22:34
这段对话里，英文太不地道了，chinglish严重=-=还要怎么纠错

* @/ a4 m, j3 R- D4 \  F! y/ m你觉得哪里不地道了