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发表于 2019-4-7 21:27:58
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本帖最后由 csw016 于 2019-4-7 21:33 编辑 ; }/ A( _, B1 L; _+ a0 {9 K
# N" v# t, Y+ q5 B本着删繁就简,简朴优于华丽或繁复的原则,原句的结构或大意大约是(也许是):5 j7 L' M# l7 \6 r: M& B+ a
someone A wants someone B to do something by a certain time.. T, x) }# a! S8 H
9 a# Q5 \! `% x2 R% Z所以,原句可改为:
" {6 [' |3 q c8 N- sEuropean Council president Donald Tusk wants Britain to come up with a Brexit plan by next April.6 ~8 e; K% C5 Q+ q
2 m, [3 D7 [9 iTo double check whether the paraphrasing is correct, ask some questions like these:
- z) d& s) ~; ^0 I1 u) X' r1, 改写的是否跟原句意思相符?6 N+ H( V5 H' Y9 [3 @
2, 是否落下了主要的意思?( ?; L5 p2 O! G5 h" `- `/ S- L
3, 是否落下或改变了 some subtle meaning? " L0 u. c1 ]; n2 V* `7 R' W
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如果以上的问题得到了比较满意的结果,那说明改写是可以接受的。2 ^* s# [# M+ N/ H% J
& Z. h7 ~9 @" B' V2 j. c0 e---“ 如果直接写【have to】的话,【until next April】还可以挪到其他什么位置吗?”( o6 |. h" ]7 U; c* l/ {2 a
不知道,因为我们以前没见过。但是我们要保守一点,碰到类似不常见的用法,不要贸然断定其对错,因为,毕竟,我们所见过的英语是有限的。但是我们可以试图换一种表达方式。) A" r/ [1 R3 z. d9 P
N3 H2 M \" f. H最后,FYI (excerpt from the Zen of Python):
9 X! W7 |% ]4 h% j. t, }; {( mBeautiful is better than ugly.& p( e/ x8 ?6 `; ?# Q
Explicit is better than implicit.
4 ~, p% `$ f3 p Y# ]5 U# tSimple is better than complex." l3 u5 z& M' m4 J7 S
Complex is better than complicated., \" d: f1 c3 z' r
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- h- O T, ?6 oReadbility counts.7 S5 |$ L6 U b: @; c! C
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