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逆风的香 发表于 2019-5-3 18:00
/ F# E& u& ?) S: F/ W E; r真题解析给的翻译：
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这么翻译是很通顺的，但翻译后的汉语中“意识”后接宾语的是“这些潮流”，而非“方 ...
1 p; d2 }1 B2 m8 pA. 宾语+定语从句：
3 X4 `7 }$ h. N1 Vwe have discovered that managers often fail to recognize [the less obvious but profound ways] (in which) these trends are influencing consumers' aspirations, attitudes, and behaviors.
这就是原句所用的语法结构："the less obvious but profound ways" 是 recognize 的宾语；
4 A1 S) W6 `% Y/ F) W/ Y- Y"(in which) these trends... behaviors"这个定语从句修饰该宾语。- e% ?$ A$ a0 F5 g# V6 z4 P
0 K! J% E( n# n而真题解析出于使译文更通顺流畅的考虑，将原句转换成了下面的句式来翻译。
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B. 宾语从句：
i" \! `- o* s: e k: w" a2 \6 \we have discovered that managers often fail to recognize [(that) these trends are influencing consumers' aspirations, attitudes, and behaviors (in) the less obvious but profound ways.
( A' J' ]! p E"these trends... profound ways" 整个从句是 recognize 的宾语，而不是 these trends 俩词作宾语；" g% X0 [0 j/ ]
"(in) the less obvious but profound ways" 作状语修饰 "these trends... behaviors" 。
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0 ~8 o% p6 x" Z个人感觉，这里作状语用时复数 ways 显得很别扭，单数 way 更自然，即 (in) the less obvious but profound way，除非将它改成 in less obvious but profound ways，即：we have discovered that managers often fail to recognize [(that) these trends are influencing consumers' aspirations, attitudes, and behaviors in less obvious but profound ways].
上述 A 和 B 虽然意思差不多，但语法结构不一样，含义也有细微差别。
; S; {" D; ?# D7 I1 _. S# qA 结构强调的是 "（多种）不显著但却意义深远的方式"，这些方式是经理们没能意识到的；而 B 结构强调的是 "这些潮流正在以（多种）并不显著但却意义深远的方式影响着消费者的渴望、态度和行为"这件事，这件事是经理们没能意识到的。" K( @! U( L8 Z+ [+ R+ a
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举个不太恰当但是同理的例子：
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