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逆风的香 发表于 2019-5-3 18:000 w$ @) p/ z% Z( `
真题解析给的翻译：4 V+ a$ S- u( u2 m
% K. F7 a) e2 m这么翻译是很通顺的，但翻译后的汉语中“意识”后接宾语的是“这些潮流”，而非“方 ...
A. 宾语+定语从句：+ y5 V0 t$ E* \- R$ d* z5 L S
we have discovered that managers often fail to recognize [the less obvious but profound ways] (in which) these trends are influencing consumers' aspirations, attitudes, and behaviors.
% O* {8 G' z' Y- P8 r4 {这就是原句所用的语法结构："the less obvious but profound ways" 是 recognize 的宾语；/ g$ U9 q; Z1 p" m4 M+ l9 f
"(in which) these trends... behaviors"这个定语从句修饰该宾语。: O2 h2 K7 n- ]; n2 n0 A) @6 [' |
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而真题解析出于使译文更通顺流畅的考虑，将原句转换成了下面的句式来翻译。- S2 H" p& x4 n7 `# n; H: `
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B. 宾语从句：
3 @& C2 y! a- Xwe have discovered that managers often fail to recognize [(that) these trends are influencing consumers' aspirations, attitudes, and behaviors (in) the less obvious but profound ways.
"these trends... profound ways" 整个从句是 recognize 的宾语，而不是 these trends 俩词作宾语；2 W- x. D4 ]* H6 c% z4 P
"(in) the less obvious but profound ways" 作状语修饰 "these trends... behaviors" 。
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+ b. @; n3 h6 `* h* ]个人感觉，这里作状语用时复数 ways 显得很别扭，单数 way 更自然，即 (in) the less obvious but profound way，除非将它改成 in less obvious but profound ways，即：we have discovered that managers often fail to recognize [(that) these trends are influencing consumers' aspirations, attitudes, and behaviors in less obvious but profound ways].
上述 A 和 B 虽然意思差不多，但语法结构不一样，含义也有细微差别。/ `! y, k5 u6 w1 ?( w
A 结构强调的是 "（多种）不显著但却意义深远的方式"，这些方式是经理们没能意识到的；而 B 结构强调的是 "这些潮流正在以（多种）并不显著但却意义深远的方式影响着消费者的渴望、态度和行为"这件事，这件事是经理们没能意识到的。
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% j" k+ R/ T4 Y( a* Z! }/ ]- This apple is big.
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